another old page

Done with a brush and tone for the bg fade.
I'm happy with the overall feel, there are some things that I would like to improve; less busy-ness with the shapes that make up the shadows, his expression in the lower, and try to get away from always drawing his face in a straight-on.

an old page, test

Just trying stuff out, difficult to get the images I see in my head down on paper or digital or what-have-you.